Haiku Workshop - November 15, 2014 2pm
November's haiku workshop, held on Saturday, November 15th, focused on sound. The meeting started with a discussion of various haiku retreats and conferences, as the sound workshop presented at the USC Pacific Asia Museum was based upon upon Susan Constable's workshop on Sound Haiku at the recent Seabeck Conference. Susan had been so kind as to send us the mp3 files she used in her workshop as well as an electronic copy of her handout.
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Before starting the sound workshop, there were a few announcements. A few Southern California Haiku Study Members have been recently honored. William Hart received a Modern Haiku Award by having his senryu from the Summer 2014 issue selected as the favorite of the issue:
in crowspeak
there are thirty-two
words for trouble
- William Hart
Modern Haiku, Vol 45.2,
Summer 2014
Two SCHSG members received awards in the 2014 Tokutomi Haiku Contest from the Yuki Teikei Society, a strict 5-7-5 haiku written to a pre-determined kigo. Gregory Longenecker received 2nd place for:
early summer rain
Mom hums some forgotten tune
in a minor key
- Gregory Longenecker
2nd place,
2014 Tokutomi Haiku Contest
Deborah P Kolodji also received an honorable mention in the same contest:
another blue sky,
another day without you. . .
apple blossom rain
- Deborah P Kolodji
Honorable Mention,
2014 Tokutomi Haiku Contest
Present were William Hart, Gregory Longenecker, Deborah P Kolodji, Kimberly Esser, Janis, James Won, Elva Lauter, Rose, Sharon, Miya Rollinger, Genie Nakano, Patricia, Yvette Kolodji, Werner, Sean Carlton, Ash Baldon, Jonathan, and Lynn. (Some poets have requested that their last name not be posted).
Before starting the sound workshop, there were a few announcements. A few Southern California Haiku Study Members have been recently honored. William Hart received a Modern Haiku Award by having his senryu from the Summer 2014 issue selected as the favorite of the issue:
in crowspeak
there are thirty-two
words for trouble
- William Hart
Modern Haiku, Vol 45.2,
Summer 2014
Two SCHSG members received awards in the 2014 Tokutomi Haiku Contest from the Yuki Teikei Society, a strict 5-7-5 haiku written to a pre-determined kigo. Gregory Longenecker received 2nd place for:
early summer rain
Mom hums some forgotten tune
in a minor key
- Gregory Longenecker
2nd place,
2014 Tokutomi Haiku Contest
Deborah P Kolodji also received an honorable mention in the same contest:
another blue sky,
another day without you. . .
apple blossom rain
- Deborah P Kolodji
Honorable Mention,
2014 Tokutomi Haiku Contest
After a read-around of haiku, moderator Deborah P Kolodji reviewed Susan's Seabeck Sound handout, and then played 12 sounds to be used as writing prompts: storm, sharpening a knife, a mosquito, an owl, a train, a babbling brook, a cat purr, a woodpecker, someone brushing his teeth, a chain saw, a rocking chair, and a jungle.
After the writing session, clips from the sound tracks were replayed as poets read their haiku for each sound. An anonymous haiku workshop finished up the meeting.
After the writing session, clips from the sound tracks were replayed as poets read their haiku for each sound. An anonymous haiku workshop finished up the meeting.
Present were William Hart, Gregory Longenecker, Deborah P Kolodji, Kimberly Esser, Janis, James Won, Elva Lauter, Rose, Sharon, Miya Rollinger, Genie Nakano, Patricia, Yvette Kolodji, Werner, Sean Carlton, Ash Baldon, Jonathan, and Lynn. (Some poets have requested that their last name not be posted).